BreathlessWind on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/breathlesswind/art/Comission-4-CallyRose-310306963BreathlessWind

Deviation Actions

BreathlessWind's avatar

Comission 4 CallyRose

Published:
791 Views

Description

"You were just going to leave with out saying hello? That hurts my feelings dearie" Rumplesitskin said sounding almost hurt.

If I had eyebrows I would of razed them, I drifted closer but only enough to better see him.

"Why would I say hello to you? I didn't come for a visit" my voice was like the sound of a breeze, only way to make anything out was to listen very hard.

"Because its polite" I almost snorted out a laugh, he wasn't serious was he? "There's no one around you can show yourself to me now, I like seeing who I'm talking too" he said with a grin.

"I rather not" I said flatly.

Rumplestiltskin's grin went away and a frown replaced it. "Why is that? Its not like I haven't seen you before"

"What are you talking about, you haven't see me before this is the first time I have been here" I told him confused.

"Oh is that so? Well I'm sorry to inform you missy but that is not true" he informed.

I thought for a short while, then decided to ask him something that would settle this matter.

"Fine then, you say you have seen me, well then what do I look like? Can you tell me that?" I was confident that I got him.

He perked up and as he spoke he also used hand gestures, I watched annoyed and defeated as he said. "Of course, you wear a black hooded robe with white embodiment around the edges, you're about this tall and have brown hair, is that good for you or do I have to go into more detail?"

"Ahhhhhh!" Crap! I thought.

"Fine!" I drifted away into the darker shadows so when I changed my face would not be seen, when I was back into my real form my hood was down, as soon as I could put it up something had went wrong, like it usually does. I could not breath, it was like I was underwater, no air was coming into my lunges I was suffocating, this was not good, I began to hit my chest to in hope of… something happening, I started to make wheezing sounds and tried to cough but nothing was coming out. Rumplesiltskin was watching, looking like I was doing this all on purpose, till I was starting to make a little to much noise.

"Calm down, hussshhh! Just breathe, you don't want to draw attention do you?" he said.

I started to sink down to the hard cold ground beginning to black out from suffocation, if my thoughts were not else were at that moment I would of thought, CALM DOWN? I CAN'T BREATH!

Rumplestiltskin kneeled down to the ground as he watched, I had gotten closer to his cage without noticing in my franticness, everything went black and I was lying still on the ground.

"Wake up your not dead, that wouldn't make any sense if you were, wake up" Rumplestiltskin said and he stretched out his finger and poked me a few times, though he could barely manage with the tip of his pointy fingernail.

After a short poise of nothing being said and only one moving was the Imp that was trying to prod me with his pointy finger to wake up, I finally did and started breathing again, I didn't say a thing only laid were I fell and waited to get myself level again.

"All better, you should be more careful with how you use your magic missy" Rumplestiltskin told me.

"I'll keep that in mind..." I managed to breath out sarcastically.


I had been comissioned by :iconcallyrose: to draw a scene from her fanfic[link] I really wanted to draw this scene -it was just so cute and funny in my head lol <XD

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get this up - well anyone's comission really. I'm so thankful for how patient you all are, there's just been so much going on this year with job searching and other events.
I have some other Rump/Belle pics I'll be putting up tonight -they're ones I've had in my book for a good couple months now that I hadn't gotten the chance to upload.

Fanfic snipet (c) :iconcallyrose:
Rumpel(c) OUAT(ABC)
Pic(c) Myself, don't use unless given permission plzkthnxbai~!
Image size
1640x2172px 7.72 MB
© 2012 - 2024 BreathlessWind
Comments14
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Dragonfire9000's avatar
I love your picture...may I put this picture as my wallpaper on my phone :)